Saturday, December 27, 2008

Love You Comments

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Don't call me Emo
Because I love you
Don't run away
Because I love you
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Victoria Ayres
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The Bobster 09 November 2009

I loved this poem. The rhythm is so powerful like a beating heart. The repeated line sounds almost like a religious mantra. The twist in the last line caught me out too! I had to read it twice to see I had it straight. Very good in my opinion. thank you.

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Victoria Ayres

Victoria Ayres

Norfolk VA
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