I loved this poem.
The rhythm is so powerful like a beating heart. The repeated line sounds almost like a religious mantra. The twist in the last line caught me out too! I had to read it twice to see I had it straight.
Very good in my opinion. thank you.
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I loved this poem. The rhythm is so powerful like a beating heart. The repeated line sounds almost like a religious mantra. The twist in the last line caught me out too! I had to read it twice to see I had it straight. Very good in my opinion. thank you.