Wednesday, September 2, 2015

Love, Yet Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under that hallowed moonlit
something softly enticed
It was two earthly sprites
sharing love’s delights.....
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2016

Sharing love's delights! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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T Rajan Evol 11 November 2015

Sensual poem.Asimji, .........

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David Wood 02 September 2015

Lovely imagery a very touching poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Roseann Shawiak 02 September 2015

Awesome imagery, each line stands on it's own, yet when all together it's a portrait of love unblemished and untamed, a magnificent expression of sharing love's delights! Touching and beautiful, a truly lovely poem! Thank you for sharing it. Thank you also for reading and commenting on two of my poems, I truly appreciate your thoughts, they help me to grow poetically. RoseAnn

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Sanjukta Nag 02 September 2015

awesome work.. full of wonderful imagery... each line is so beautiful in its own way.. loved it.......... more than 10

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