Friday, March 19, 2010

Love Worth Dying For Comments

Rating: 5.0

where the smoke rolls
and the fires control
a demon is loose
from the shrine of its imprisonment
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Lunar Phantom
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Girl Who Lives In Hell 19 April 2010

Lunar does not know Shit? Don't listen to him. This is a good poem.

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Crazy Vampire 26 March 2010

i totally love this poem! keep it up!

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Iron Panda 23™ 22 March 2010

awesomific xP lol 'Dude, you wrote this poem about inyuasha. That is so not right.'

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Chidori Storm 22 March 2010

Dude, you wrote this poem about inyuasha. That is so not right.

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 19 March 2010

I loved the descriptive language you used to deliver your strong, heartbreaking message, smooth flow, sensuous words and emotive tone, well done

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this is a good poem it was interesting....keep writing 10/10

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