where the smoke rolls
and the fires control
a demon is loose
from the shrine of its imprisonment
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awesomific xP lol 'Dude, you wrote this poem about inyuasha. That is so not right.'
Dude, you wrote this poem about inyuasha. That is so not right.
I loved the descriptive language you used to deliver your strong, heartbreaking message, smooth flow, sensuous words and emotive tone, well done
this is a good poem it was interesting....keep writing 10/10
Lunar does not know Shit? Don't listen to him. This is a good poem.