Can you paint without color,
can you think without language
Can you dance without music
...
Read full text
You have post a thought provoking question in your poem. Can love be without pain? Pain is part of loving it comes along with love.
Love the pairing of the concrete with the abstract. Invites to contemplate the deeper aspect of your thought before the final question is posed. We begin the processing of the analogy by being forced to confront concepts of language and color, concepts that have much deeper layers than the ones with which we deal on an everyday basis. And suddenly, we must also confront in such deeper fashion the painful truth of love. Excellent.