Saturday, November 5, 2011

Love Without Pain Comments

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</>Fire is unexpected without smoke
Love is also unexpected without pain
If love is fire then pain is smoke
Smoke is the realization of fire
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Hazel Durham 19 March 2013

So true and so beautifully expressed with great imagery!

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Jinal Oswal 25 November 2011

Love and fire compared so well... Nice write :)

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Vp Ramesan 15 November 2011

Equating love with fire is a realastic tone in the Poem, Love imbibe fire, but fire never imbibe love. Love creates a spring where as fire creates a grave. congrats

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 14 November 2011

wow this is true love and pain are inseparable but pain could be taken in easily as long as love will be more powerful

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Vipins Puthooran 06 November 2011

Love is like fire, , I enjoy this poem; a good one And that metaphor! ! ! well written! ! !

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