Sunday, November 16, 2008

Love Within The Sparkling Snow Comments

Rating: 2.8

When we met at that snowy day
Within the snow rain falling from the sky
Overwhelmed us with its spark
Overwhelmed us with our feeling
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Brianna Trombley 17 December 2008

beautiful poem, with lovely imagery, great job

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 30 November 2008

nice descriptive poem! keep writing! let's listen to Tchaikovsky's Ballet (The Nutcracker) Waltz of the Snowflakes, when we read this cute poem!

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Fiona Davidson 30 November 2008

What a beautiful thought...to be proposed to under the falling snow...Thank you for sharing this with us...Fi

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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2008

Good love poem, LMS...lot of expectations and confidence there...good piece...10

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Very sweet i love the whole snow verses very nicely written..

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