Friday, October 21, 2016

Love Within Love Comments

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When the shy beloved dig her whole body,
and brought dough of the clay she had,
added essence of beauty in it,
extracted,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2016

Long and silky hair gives wave breath. Crazy lover then jumps her feet and sees love in interesting chapter. Amazing poem this is.10

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Rajnish Manga 22 October 2016

Lovely poem with an apt narrative praising the beauty of a woman and her heart full of love longing to unite wit her lover to conceive another life to be 'Love Within Love'. Thanks a lot.

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Khalid Saifullah 21 October 2016

Story of life in poet's lovely style..............................................................

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