Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Love With All My Might Comments

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The very thing I loved is now gone
And I don't know how else to move on
I lock up my tears and allow the pain to build
Time won't allow me none to heal
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Marcquiese Burrell
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Colleen House 17 September 2008

It's beautiful, painful, and so very real.

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Hirzel Davids 17 September 2008

It's a very good poem. I really liked the message. It was a nice writ. :) . Keep it up. Thanks, I enjoyed. Good Luck and Take care.: D

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Marcquiese Burrell

Marcquiese Burrell

Baltimore, MD
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