Even though I won't ever hear your
voice again. I'll hear it when the willows
sing. And when the whippoorwills call.
And when the breeze blows through the
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B) and very touching life song, according to PH I can only give you 5 Stars, but for me I give you billion myriad more, I am not only poetess but also critic, so I know what I am writing about and to who........
A) Indeed so very true, my dearest Becca, the heart will always recall. You are true to life as it IS, you are a life poetess, a great One, your touching poems are constantly ornamented with sublimest end-and internal rhymes, like this gorgeous sad
Nature has a way to join us in sorrow and heal our pains. A beautiful poem with superb imagery. Very touching and inspiring.
No matter what but to miss a dear one is very painful. A poem with true feelings.5***
Outstanding imagery. And great sentiment. And what a final line! ! ! I feel your pain, Rebecca.
Though the poem is actually a song addressed to a departed soul (I presume) , it's imagery and ornamental make up close to the nature pleases the reader. A delightful experience. Thank You Becca, for sharing.
this was a real joy to read though you made me miss my mum Bravo!
C) of course to YOU, my one and only dearest Becca, God's Blessings in Abundance for you and for your beloved family, Amen. (I know too this very sadness you continuously feel)