Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Love, Where Are You? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mournful hymns composed by my heart
Cry out in this desolate night,
The moon's wearing a veil of black,
Not one star will offer its light
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Lora Colon
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David Lessard 06 December 2014

Love can be an ache as well as a joy. Wonderfully expressed.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 06 December 2014

O, my beloved, where are you? Why are your thoughts no longer mine... My senses succumb to frenzy, Love and peace no longer align An excellent love poem.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2014

O, my beloved where are you? Are your thoughts no longer mine. Cries of a desolate heart poured in every word. Yet this pouring works as a balm. Thank you for sharing.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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