Friday, April 25, 2008

Love, We Use Your Name In Vain Comments

Rating: 4.7

Love, hallowed was your name
Before mankind deformed it
Now they use your name in such vain
I think they have destroyed it
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Tyrone Wingfield
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Ashley Ormon 14 October 2008

Wow, our poems do somewhat parallel each other. You said my poems were nice, I don't know this one is extremely good.10.

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Asia Joseph 08 October 2008

sorry lol tyrone is what i meant to write! ! ! ! !

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Asia Joseph 08 October 2008

This is so real it gave me chills, it speaks to your heart and tug at our wrong doings very nice james many thanks Asia

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Evaughn Gray 21 June 2008

wow that last line got me..! i'm speechless Tyrone great write.~Love Eva

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Ashley Burnam 31 May 2008

Tyrone this poem, It speaks to me. I think you hit the nail on the head when you wrote this. Keep listening to that muse. Ashley

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