Saturday, September 12, 2020

Love Wave Comments

Rating: 4.8

Love wave

Love is like a sinusoidal wave
It goes up and down an octave
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2020

Very philosophical poem about LOVE and loveliest informed A true l.u.s.t. for the eyes to read I do love Love poems like this is so true: he who stays in love is a hero I have enjoyed a very lot An alluring poem about love.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 12 September 2020

Forth not fourth.....thank you poet. Too much rhyming i end up rhyming march and much. Practice. Love brings forth fruit on the fourth of July in the form of the US of A.

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Varsha M 12 September 2020

Very true words. Communication is above all.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 September 2020

An excellent poem with an appropriate caption. It comes like a gentle wave and flows along steadily. Should the third word of the fourth line of the third stanza be 'forth' instead of 'fourth'? I thought so.

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