Love Vs Lust Comments

Love Vs Lust is a long living dilemma, and you have answered so rightly in the last stanza: 'The whole game is up to us, To judge and act in a rightful way And not to play any fuss.' - Well done, my friend!

Both the topics are sky touching. in a very short words you have specialised wonder of these two words. Regards

judge and act in a rightful way The fundamental principle is forgotten by a few and introduces problems in society. Nice poem.

Amitava, having read your poem again I see and understand what you were trying to say. Especially when reading these lines again: There lies the mystery and truth The whole game is up to us, To judge and act in a rightful way And not to play any fuss. Once I read them calmly again, I knew what you were saying. A beautiful, thoughtful poem, Amitava. I see your perception now. Thank you. RoseAnn

A beautiful poem............