Tuesday, August 11, 2015

Love Veil Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a buried city in this desert
sun is cautious
and i know it's setting
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Roseann Shawiak 12 August 2015

Mysteriously haunting poem, death's veil covering love, sun is cautious, is it rising? Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Saman Shahraki 12 August 2015

Thanks; you made me happy

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Avi Saltzman 11 August 2015

amazed best i hurd so far

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Saman Shahraki 12 August 2015

Thank you

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Kelly Kurt 11 August 2015

AN eerie and haunting poem, Saman

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