Friday, October 13, 2006

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Rating: 4.5

Love in seventeen
syllables is intellect
trampled by passion
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kenneth william snow
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Patrick Bateman 16 October 2006

Tremendous display of poetic muscle. A good ending is essential to leaving the reader with a savory after taste and you nailed it: 'cleave equilibrium'.

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