Her body is a melting pot
On the silken sheet
with pillow beneath
trying hard to hold spinning head
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Breathtaking poem with such a passion you wrote it came live to me.
A sensual love poem with twisted climax. Loved the way you wrote this poem, Asim.10
Wow! - Yes! This is a fiery poem! We do not get the chance to read one of this every day! That is Love! That is Passion! That is Life! That is M. Asim Nehal's Poetry! Sublime!
Untouched love... Pure love and amazing love, Great write.
Every word is dipped in the syrup of love and till the very end it remained unblamed and pure.
Sublime sensuality of such passionate love, breathtakingly beautiful write! !
...hairs like desert of vast eternity....fascinating use of simile! A lovely poem my friend....10
Quite a passionate poem! Beautifully done with metaphors and images of original and powerful poetic appeal.
love, sweet love here is depicted on sensual beautiful feelings
Your poem have magical touch and takes reader to rejoice moments.