Thursday, January 31, 2019

Love - Untouched(Bucolic) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her body is a melting pot
On the silken sheet
with pillow beneath
trying hard to hold spinning head
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M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Rajeshwari Bala 31 January 2021

Your poem have magical touch and takes reader to rejoice moments.

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Michael Jack 12 July 2020

Breathtaking poem with such a passion you wrote it came live to me.

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Gordon Walter 17 April 2019

Awesome love poem. loved it 10

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Zuzu Mutairi 23 February 2019

A sensual love poem with twisted climax. Loved the way you wrote this poem, Asim.10

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M Asim Nehal 26 February 2019

Thx Much Z O

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Mihaela Pirjol 01 February 2019

Wow! - Yes! This is a fiery poem! We do not get the chance to read one of this every day! That is Love! That is Passion! That is Life! That is M. Asim Nehal's Poetry! Sublime!

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M Asim Nehal 26 February 2019

Thank u so much my friend Mihaela.

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Rajeshwari Bala 31 January 2021

Dear poet you said it appropriately. Your comment is wonderful.

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Ricky Manhatten 31 January 2019

Untouched love... Pure love and amazing love, Great write.

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M Asim Nehal 26 February 2019

Thx much Ricky M..

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T Rajan Evol 31 January 2019

Every word is dipped in the syrup of love and till the very end it remained unblamed and pure.

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Hazel Durham 31 January 2019

Sublime sensuality of such passionate love, breathtakingly beautiful write! !

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2019

Thank u so much Ms Hazel

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2019

...hairs like desert of vast eternity....fascinating use of simile! A lovely poem my friend....10

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2019

Thanks much Dr. Dillip.

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Sandra Feldman 31 January 2019

Quite a passionate poem! Beautifully done with metaphors and images of original and powerful poetic appeal.

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2019

Thanks Much Ms Sandra.

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 January 2019

love, sweet love here is depicted on sensual beautiful feelings

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2019

Thank u so much Mahtab..

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