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Beautiful rendition of words in a verse with rhythmic splendour. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

They are majestic, And their fate has been meshed with ours for eons. Whether they pulled war chariots or ploughs they were essential. The language of your poem does justice to them. You don't relate cute things about horses performing tricks for audiences. Your horses are stretching their sinews. For freedom in one memorable part of your poem. The only horses I knew in the past were work hiorses who were docile and exhausted from over-work, But Felipe is the horse you poem brkings to life, and his is a proud, free nature, ther ideal image of the horse.

I used to live in an apartment complex which was adjacent ti a huge farm fields with gently rolling hills and lush lawns, because the farm has shut down and the space was for grazing, prancing, running-free horses urban people owned. For four years I saw those horses everyday ans many of the horses saw more of me than their owners! I was always respectful of their wildness and freedom. The thought of riding one never crossed my mind: I worshiped them as masters of the earth. And I could fully embrace the Myth of the Centaur when I talked to one in English and he or she nudged me with their massive head and one great eye stared completely through my body. Your poem has restored these memories of so long go. The horses are gone, the fields destroyed, a huge freeway has replaced the Freedom of Horses. Bless you for your poem: you restored all of this lost grandeur in my mind.

this poem has wonderful Rhyme with great message........10+++

Aloha Anastasia... Neigh... My Young Lady... as each of your previous reviewers have responded... you, are a poetess to be reckoned with... easy on my reins there my sweet... really good word works that works well together and is delightfully inspiring... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

Awesome poem! Totally love horses they are wild and free as you have stated. They match my personality perfectly! Really great poem, you have captured the spirit of these majestic creatures spiritually! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Daring and boundless is their soul No rope, no reins can hold them still They do only as they will Seek not for trophy but earn their trust They'll never love a heart unjust Open your soul, never use force I was seeing a parallel in this poem to human relationship also. A poem which makes us think a lot. Thank you dear poetess. tony

If really you are only twenty years old and this poem is yours, I can assure you that you are going to become a great poetress.

I would prefer to comment your poem in greek, had I been sure you speak and understand it as english your poem proves to.Anyway, It is a very very good poem, a real poem.You seem to have a great talent.It is the first poem of yours I read.I have not looked up to see who you are, studies, age etc.I was astonished by the first reading.It was an apocalyps to me.I thought I'm in front of a real poet.Confratulations.I'll look up to see if you have published other poems too.I'll read all of them.

I love what you have done here! I would love to read more of your poems! Check out my poems and tell me what you think. Have a nice day!