Love Unrequited Comments

Agony of unrequited love is portrayed in deep. The heart throb is crystal clear in each line Have a glance at Love Ride, Love Again!

This poem seems to be an exercise in paradoxes. You generated a dozen or so clustered around the image of unrequited love, and they're sharp and direct, nothing fuzzy or sentimental. The opening stanza has a winning pair that express a familiar lovers' paradox: I'LL NEVER LEAVE AND I CAN'T STAY. And a few lines later vis a vis the beloved's alluring eyes, O, HOW I DESPISE, HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU. It's as if Catullus's famous or infamous paradox from 2100 years ago just won't stop: I LOVE AND I HATE.