** Love Under The Inca Sky! Comments

Sparkling freshness of love with Nature. CP

This poem is romantic and has a slight naughty feel to it aswell ; -) , , i love it

a beautiful piece.... well penned..

A beautifully picturesque write.

Its absolutely beautiful this poem. I can picture it in my mind 10++

Well written you create a picture in my mind

go to bed with your happy thoughts, And think of the goodness of your heart; Of kissing you behind those bushes once more, When our lips will get locked, - never to part! ...... all old good memories and to becherished it all. find touch to feelings...10 read mine mary to marry and imiss i miss u and o mother

Exotic and hoghly metaphorical...a tender delicate narration of love in verses....congrats

a very passionate poem! well-crafted.10: -)

In this poem we find extended metaphors like: ''a stolen kiss on your lips, /Those tender lips so innocent and pure'', also epithets like: ''tall bushes''''slender trees'', also submerged metaphors like: ''With your black hair’s cascading flow'', also similes like: ''I think of you as my guiding star'', conceptual metaphor like: ''I go to bed with your happy thoughts'' and comparisons like: ''With your laughter like the mountain stream''. Their role is to compare his loved woman to nature and to enhance her moral and physical qualities.10++

Love is timeless under the Inca Sky. You have a way with words. Kind regards, Sandra

''With your laughter like the mountain stream, You stay so near, and yet you are so far! '' The poem is very deep and beautiful 10++

a lovely love poem well versed.

'I go to bed with your happy thoughts, And think of the goodness of your heart; Of kissing you behind those bushes once more, When our lips will get locked, - never to part! ' Exciting lovely poem.10++

very romantic and sensuous, kind of youthful feel to it, but then love knows no age Cupid can strike at any stage...10 Mamta

a mystic environment and such delicate moments of love...you are at your best, capt!

Beautoful piece Raj about a very mysterious place...10+++