I guess you lost your patience,
And found a broken heart.
I should have told you sooner,
Uncertain love's, not smart.
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To say least, i felt when i read the poem. the great. cheers
you're poem is true... but you should understand that some girls are weak and easy to make them fall in love... easy to do whatever you want them to do because they give a 110% when they fall... even there are many playboy or heartbrakers they don't stop believing that someday they will be ending up with the right man... I know guys sometimes wish that there just one woman that will stay beside him forever... keep him company.... make him happy... take care of him... and love him...
Amazing....you sure are gifted. this poem really suits me and my condition. great job.
...here is a lesson which to be learnt. Flow of verses astonishing!
I HAVE READ A FEW OF YOUR POEMS BUT THIS ONE BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES, I CAN RELATE TO THIS PAIN YET IT IS SO HARD TO LET GO.
Nice strong poem in form and syntax. Love the flow of it as well. keep this poems coming. (10/10, favorited)
Love uncertain comes to naught; indeed! Love certain may in time came to naught, too; but at least it would have lasted a blissful time - come to think of it, is there such a thing as love certain, except the love of God for us? I liked this a lot; provokes deep thought.
A lovely poem based upon experience, a warm warning towards unstable love which shows, on the contrary, what true love would be. Very interesting! 10
In reality this is true... I' ll like the way you express the emotion in this poem.. Do I need to say more... everything is there... good write..
This is an excellent writing; and very true. Thank you, Jeannie.
OH... this is brilliant! My sentiments exactly - 10/10 PS - in response to one of the readers comments - all the four letter words were very necessary to get the point across ;)
Oh I love this one! ! It has a very even flow with alot of wisdom in it. I think in reality many many love 'affairs start out this way, and it takes alot of courage to ackowledge when uncertainy is in play, someone will end up with a broken heart.... This is very good.......
I must agree with Ms. Grey, from the first verse to the last- this is one to pass around
perfect lesson to be learnt...I wish some of the people I love would take this advice...I wait here for the real thing...great work.
You get a just dessert. ................................ You perfectly write, my friend... But naive birdies do not think of it, differently they will transform to hens... Tsira
You must seem to have a lot to say about Love. Another nice piece, here, I think.
'Love Uncertain' isn't all love uncertain, nothing is ever a guarantee, so when we go into a relationship in love we are uncertain it will last or how it will affect us. nice write, hun.