Sunday, April 15, 2018

Love Tree (A Comment On Perdita Young's Poem If Love Be A Plant) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think love is a dense tree,
it has roots and trunk,
it has branches and leaves,
it has flowers and fruits.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Perdita Young 17 April 2018

Thank you so much, Akhtar, for the excellent poem as a comment. I wish to have found and read it earlier than today... Too much occupied on Mondays and Tuesdays and Thursdays and Fridays. Greetings from afar. Perdita

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2018

An excellent piece of work! Liked the first seven lines most! Thanks dear sir for sharing! ...............10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 April 2018

Mixing nature and love at its best. An encompassing love is drawn from this marvelous write. The last six lines are very moving. Beautifully crafted piece.10

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Dawn Novus 15 April 2018

...and whispers in my ear...your life has been increased for another lovely day. What a lovely way to look at the gift of a new day. The love tree I will sleep under next full moon. Thank you for sharing this.

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Rini Shibu 15 April 2018

Wonderful comparison of love as a dense tree..enjoyed this poem

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