I did not write you down in poetry
Least my readers discover you badly-
Pleading my poetic weakness;
I did not paint your face on canvas
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love it- You are my ever green love tree That prevents the pollution /// great poetic expression
Nicely crafted one... Ending is also very nice... Thank you. With best wishes pc
but, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , for the showcase i'll leave a note about 'lest/least'..........if i don't forget. ;) :) bri
i 'love' trees and, though i don't care much for love poems (usually) , i like this one a lot. it is very unique and a treasure on PH. to MyPoemList it goes! and i'll put it into January's showcase as well! bri :) thanks for alerting me to the poem's existence!
i love this stanza: (and the one after it also!) So l plant you at the deepest Earth of my heart, Where my lungs provide air and my blood, As a postman, carries temperature and water. My young-ling love sprouts to a big shade- tree Like an umbrella over my head. and this made me laugh: And your quivering quivers my calm body (to be continued) ...... bri :)
i found this, online: American English keeps alive the old word “lest” in phrases like “lest we forget, ” referring to something to be avoided or prevented. Many people mistakenly substitute the more familiar word “least” in these phrases. oops! but i knew what you meant. :) (to be continued) ...........
I am elated with your comment... My heart is tossing.... Only a thanks would be less to greet your views.
Amazing creativity with striking play of words. Pleasure of reading poetry never stops simply because of poems like this. Congratulations for a great poem and member poem place.
So cleverly written. So cleverly ended. You have such a vivid imagination. You play wonderfully well with your words. Well done, you! And congratulation for being chosen as the day's best poet.
Congratulations sir.....a beautiful poem full of perfect images..thanks to you and poemhunter for sharing....
It is like you are playing upon your flute, while I am leaning against a tree and listening..........so beautifully composed........really speechless.........deserves P.O.D......THANKS FOR SHARING........10++++++++++++
An amazing write ! ! It looks ever new, every time I read it.What pleasure, what joy , what peace the lover gets under the shade of love tree ! ! He wants his love to grow in the deep of his heart, away from the prying eyes of others. Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day. Wish you a very Happy New Year.
Love can happen only to one. And rest is pollution. Nice spilling of emotion. Congrats.
Spontaneous Dance! ! Love and dreams! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Such a heartwarming write penned in the depth of love..congrats for being chosen.... a huge 10+++
Merry Christmas, .... Thanks for your inspiring evaluation.... I am happy.
a beautiful poem of how true love affects the mind and body? ..............wonderfully written Sk. Nural Huda.
Thank you very much, I am inspired, do accept my cordial wishes Tom, and bid you all Merry Christmas.
So I plant you at the deepest Earth of my heart, So I plant you at the deepest Earth of my heart, Where my lungs provide air and my blood... So I plant you at the deepest Earth of my heart, Where my lungs provide air and my blood... I love these...A vivid and so expressive portrayal in your piece...Thank you so much, Nurul for sharing a splendid work of artistry...10++++++++
I see how deeply and earnestly you read the poem.... I am happy it touches you..... Thank you very much for reading and commenting on.
Comparison of love with that of branches of tree reflects deep emotion of life. Nicely sketched with soulful ink. Thanks for sharing.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, a beautiful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.