Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India
Wednesday, July 6, 2016

Love Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

I did not write you down in poetry
Least my readers discover you badly-
Pleading my poetic weakness;
I did not paint your face on canvas
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Sk. Nurul Huda
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Chinedu Dike 20 March 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, a beautiful creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

love it- You are my ever green love tree That prevents the pollution /// great poetic expression

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Pallab Chaudhury 24 November 2018

Nicely crafted one... Ending is also very nice... Thank you. With best wishes pc

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Bri Edwards 29 December 2017

but, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , for the showcase i'll leave a note about 'lest/least'..........if i don't forget. ;) :) bri

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Bri Edwards 29 December 2017

i 'love' trees and, though i don't care much for love poems (usually) , i like this one a lot. it is very unique and a treasure on PH. to MyPoemList it goes! and i'll put it into January's showcase as well! bri :) thanks for alerting me to the poem's existence!

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Bri Edwards 29 December 2017

i love this stanza: (and the one after it also!) So l plant you at the deepest Earth of my heart, Where my lungs provide air and my blood, As a postman, carries temperature and water. My young-ling love sprouts to a big shade- tree Like an umbrella over my head. and this made me laugh: And your quivering quivers my calm body (to be continued) ...... bri :)

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Bri Edwards 29 December 2017

i found this, online: American English keeps alive the old word “lest” in phrases like “lest we forget, ” referring to something to be avoided or prevented. Many people mistakenly substitute the more familiar word “least” in these phrases. oops! but i knew what you meant. :) (to be continued) ...........

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B.m. Biswas 02 January 2018

I am elated with your comment... My heart is tossing.... Only a thanks would be less to greet your views.

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Savita Tyagi 28 December 2017

Amazing creativity with striking play of words. Pleasure of reading poetry never stops simply because of poems like this. Congratulations for a great poem and member poem place.

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Christina Simmons 28 December 2017

So cleverly written. So cleverly ended. You have such a vivid imagination. You play wonderfully well with your words. Well done, you! And congratulation for being chosen as the day's best poet.

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Rajat Ghosh 28 December 2017

Congratulations sir.....a beautiful poem full of perfect images..thanks to you and poemhunter for sharing....

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 December 2017

It is like you are playing upon your flute, while I am leaning against a tree and listening..........so beautifully composed........really speechless.........deserves P.O.D......THANKS FOR SHARING........10++++++++++++

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James Mclain 28 December 2017

S.K. congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Bharati Nayak 28 December 2017

An amazing write ! ! It looks ever new, every time I read it.What pleasure, what joy , what peace the lover gets under the shade of love tree ! ! He wants his love to grow in the deep of his heart, away from the prying eyes of others. Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day. Wish you a very Happy New Year.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 December 2017

Love can happen only to one. And rest is pollution. Nice spilling of emotion. Congrats.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 December 2017

Spontaneous Dance! ! Love and dreams! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 December 2017

Such a heartwarming write penned in the depth of love..congrats for being chosen.... a huge 10+++

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Sk Nurul Huda 28 December 2017

Merry Christmas, .... Thanks for your inspiring evaluation.... I am happy.

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Tom Allport 28 December 2017

a beautiful poem of how true love affects the mind and body? ..............wonderfully written Sk. Nural Huda.

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Sk Nurul Huda 28 December 2017

Thank you very much, I am inspired, do accept my cordial wishes Tom, and bid you all Merry Christmas.

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

Love sprout out to big shade tree, awesome, ++10

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Sk Nurul Huda 28 December 2017

Thank you very much, I am glad.

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Cheryl Tutaan 22 May 2017

So I plant you at the deepest Earth of my heart, So I plant you at the deepest Earth of my heart, Where my lungs provide air and my blood... So I plant you at the deepest Earth of my heart, Where my lungs provide air and my blood... I love these...A vivid and so expressive portrayal in your piece...Thank you so much, Nurul for sharing a splendid work of artistry...10++++++++

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B.m. Biswas 22 May 2017

I see how deeply and earnestly you read the poem.... I am happy it touches you..... Thank you very much for reading and commenting on.

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Ramesh Rai 25 September 2016

Comparison of love with that of branches of tree reflects deep emotion of life. Nicely sketched with soulful ink. Thanks for sharing.

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Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India
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