Saturday, March 4, 2006

Love Trapp'D Thee, To Thy Beautied Stare. Comments

Rating: 3.5

A flora fauna of sea breeze, wafts daintly
thru thy air...
My love for thee, be ever clear, and ever more the fair.
My hoped for one as lovely...
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Michael Gale
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Gina Onyemaechi 04 March 2006

Delightful recreation of the language of courtly love. Good you, Mike. Warm regards and a score of 9 from Gina.

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Patricia Gale 04 March 2006

Traps me in to stare, lovely line. Nicely written Patricia

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

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