Love Transcends Comments

The truth survives all interplay Apart from words that shackle souls Fantastic opening to a poem with a lot of truth to it. Pleasure to read!

Monica, Some of the phrases sparkle here in this poem, that is meaningful and deep, loaded with truth of love and truth itself. 1. words that shackle souls: I am amazed at the simplicity of the opening...truth survives...wow Love transcends the form that binds: on ehas to believe in love and see the forms that emerge once you feel and flow with it.... 3. Beyond the fear.... the traditional rules, forms, frames are are worthless..as love can reach far beyond..... 4. A joy is shared...united soul - It is important to know the final impact of any form of love, be it platonic love, be it the love with himself or the greater self for that matter...the focus and feeling of being united with onself is simply great.... this poem rocks as much as you do... wow is the word

I like it was kinda nice. Good job ;)