Sunday, December 17, 2017

Love Traces Comments

Rating: 4.5

Domination charged with passion
Words to subdue he strikes deep
Again and again breathlessly vain
Enchanted crazy. she cries for more,
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Jai K Garg
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Jazib Kamalvi 17 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Jai. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2017

A lovely short poem I liked the intensity of expression

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2017

Again and again breathlessly vain! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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