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Dear Hasmukhbhai, “I have tied a nuptial knot The battle was really fought You finally came under my seize It was more than a noble prize” The above quoted stanza reminds of Walter Scott’s Lochinvar. “So faithful in love, and so dauntless in war, There never was knight like the young Lochinvar.” It seems there is something of Lochinvar in you. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Jun 24,2013

A puritan love with all the exclamations of love narrated at length, a true friendship turned into a love story. Edward Wahbe6 minutes ago The classical love story expressed in measures stanzas, and easy verses, flowing with ease to entertain the reader. Good measures in the four line verses carrying one idea at a time. A step by step lead for the reader to get interested. I was and offer this poem a four star I like It

nice Belinda Jacobson11 minutes ago great to see a man who knows how to love

It's a well written piece Levi Davis8 minutes ago Though, you throw me off with the srhyming in the begging, though it doesnt continue in the latter parts It started of great yet, I'm a firm believer tht poems don; t jave to ryhme to be a awesome piece of lititure I'm sorry but you've lost me at the ending Keep writing on I give my honest opinion, that's all I have :)

I have a problem with the flow. Jim Hollingsworth8 minutes ago I like the sharing of feeling but do not connect with the phrasing.

Jim Hollingsworth8 minutes ago I like the sharing of feeling but do not connect with the phrasing. Comment +1 Try again

Hashan Mannan11 minutes ago 'style and meanwhile' creates a good rhyme, but what's the meaning? Does it create any sense? The theme or story is not clear and well expressed. Punctuation are also absent.