Sunday, November 17, 2013

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I am not worried but wearied
Water of dust is about to dry
For I breathed the golden dust
Of the morning sun, I don’t cry
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Kanav Justa 18 November 2013

.. the last two lines are really very powerful.. the whole poem makes a lot of sense... nice write

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Yasmin Khan 17 November 2013

A beautiful message of universal love, nice write

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Wahab Abdul 17 November 2013

enjoyed the poem, lovely poem indeed...use of words fine.. and great going brother...

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