.....Love! Till We Die.... Comments

Excellent

this is a masterpiece and u are so right my friend...lovely =)

one can be seperated from the loved though in closeset proximity...this is first time ever i read a poem of yours...enjoyed reading...cheer

There is lot of life in this poem...love and imagination too...hollow comments won't explain the solidness in this write...well done, Wardha...10

WROTE WONDERFULLY ON THE PAIN IN LOVE... AS IN U LIVED EVERY WORD U WROTE...

you pound on the cruelty of love and separation with amazing romance... the emotion grows out of the words and forms a delicious image.... and what wonderful rhythm to these lines, bravo!

oh! ! wardha thia is a masterpeice.........10!

Ammmmmazing composition indeed! Love inspires love hurts circling everyday dawn and dusk ++10

and talons, like a vice grown.. which bleed me each day and wound me in every way.. Womanly feline has been let loose to hunt down any unsuspecting weakling that unknowingly strays into this realm. Very powerful and very different Wardha speaks to the avid reader this time around.

The first two stanza lead to some complex feelings in the last one, , , , the flow is smooth and the words follow a rythm. Curse shall surely break but on love, , , ,10++