Next door I heard her arduously praying,
When appearing out of nowhere - a quiet gusting.
Shivering not; but caustiously aware of a presence,
An aroma unfamiliar...crowding the dark room.
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A heart touching poem, a nice poem of the day, congrats.
I feel like this whenever I happen to cross any foot path at night.Heart-touching poem.Thank you and congrats!
I've walked by a few during my trips to NYC, although it's been a few years and I was young. I always felt sorry for them, wondering what their story was. I remember a young man playing a guitar and singing for change near the PATH train in the World Trade Center two weeks before 9/11. As I watched the towers fall on TV, over and over again, I wondered what had happened to him. I will remember your poem when I next return to NYC or any similar city. And I liked the last few lines, to receive a second chance is a great blessing. Darla :)
Unique in scope and dimension, adds layers of meaning and variation to the traditional love thy neighbour theme. Absolutely deserved a 10+.
A great poem expressing the incidents of sadness, its beautiful images the poem is a success and full of truths in real life. I enjoyed as an ordinary reader.
It's a great poem that makes someone enjoys it fully. Thanks.
Nice poem. We all need to 'feed our love'. Thanks for sharing
The crown itself is beauty..morning show the day lovely
The day of reckoning. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.
The day of reckoning. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.
Oh God...have mercy on my soul Indeed a nice plea for mercy, Brian! Blessings!
A sublime piece of work The poetic expression is adorable..10