Wednesday, February 2, 2005

Love Through The Lens Comments

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Love is like a Photo,
Sometimes Clear, sometimes Faint,
Some you've Lost, some you've Gained.
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Helgard du Preez
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Michael Shepherd 05 March 2005

I think that's a great idea, Helgard, and there could be more to say, with this neat parallel. But we're terrible snobs about our English skills here on this site - be warned - but don't give up! !

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Camacy Melville 27 February 2005

this poem was strong in the beggining but seemed to fade towards the end.keep your poems strong throughout the poetry.Nice job anyway :)

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Helgard Du Preez 05 February 2005

Hi, My native language is Afrikaans which is kinda similiar to Dutch and a little bit of german

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Herbert Nehrlich1 02 February 2005

Is your native language German? H

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dissatified exmember 02 February 2005

Nice Attempt. Keep them coming

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