Love Through The Lens Comments

I think that's a great idea, Helgard, and there could be more to say, with this neat parallel. But we're terrible snobs about our English skills here on this site - be warned - but don't give up! !

this poem was strong in the beggining but seemed to fade towards the end.keep your poems strong throughout the poetry.Nice job anyway :)

Hi, My native language is Afrikaans which is kinda similiar to Dutch and a little bit of german

Is your native language German? H

Nice Attempt. Keep them coming