Love is like a Photo,
Sometimes Clear, sometimes Faint,
Some you've Lost, some you've Gained.
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this poem was strong in the beggining but seemed to fade towards the end.keep your poems strong throughout the poetry.Nice job anyway :)
Hi, My native language is Afrikaans which is kinda similiar to Dutch and a little bit of german
I think that's a great idea, Helgard, and there could be more to say, with this neat parallel. But we're terrible snobs about our English skills here on this site - be warned - but don't give up! !