Friday, January 22, 2016

Love Thought Train Comments

Rating: 5.0

This philosophical love leads to profound realism
Intensified by nights spent in this prison
Every instant I'm away from you
My deepest love is in limbo
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Roseann Shawiak 24 January 2016

Absolutely articulate and beautiful poem of love, could feel it throughout your poem. Such eloquent passion beneath the surface giving this poem an effervescent illumination into philosophical love, yet reality standing there so preciously tender. Just love this poem's essence, Weldon. Give it 10 - 10''s if I could. Going on my favorite poem list and if you don't mind my poet list also. Magnificent portrait of love in your words. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Weldon Davis 25 January 2016

Roseann thank you for your kind words and critique of my poem..I also see that you commented on my Forever poem as well...Since you like both of those poems you should check out Returnity which falls somewhat into the same gist...Also I would be a fool not to want you to add me to your fav poets list! ! ..I'm honored, and thankful that you would do so...All of these poems were written in a three year span, and now I'm almost caught up and will have to go to the trusty old pad and scratch out some more thoughts and feelings hahaha...Once again thank you for reading..Much appreciated :)

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