Tuesday, October 16, 2018

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The ones who do not love you,
Grow night in your skies' carpet
So, get it on as if it was a step you are waiting for
To flirt lilac
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2018

This is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression with nice collocation. Every line is interesting to read. Thank you dear poetess keep the ball rolling.

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shurouk hammoud 22 October 2018

thank you for reading dear friend..thrilled to have you here

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 October 2018

The ones who do not love you, Grow night in your skies' carpet So, get it on as if it was a step you are waiting for To flirt lilac To get it pregnant with gardens. You are very original and very creative.......please write more and present to us. i shall read you and comment and rate your poems....... thank u dear poetess. tony

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shurouk hammoud 17 October 2018

I am thrilled to have such a friend dear poet Tony, and always looking forward your feedback.thank you dear friend.

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