Love: The Throne Of The Heart (Radha-47) Comments

You had known That I was not yours Still you have accepted me Leaving everybody in the background. great expression.. beautiful lines

This is an intense poem about the struggle to find love. It offers conflicting images - reigning the throne of hearts and yet pounding the chest. I felt that some lines like wiping the whole body were not in symmetry with the rest of the poem. However a lovely result.

This is beautiful, my favorite! And to think, I'm just beginning to read... Great Ink! ! ! Thank You Subrat. -Kelly.