Saturday, April 14, 2012

Love The Children! Comments

Rating: 5.0

when the money is gone,
and they've taken everything away...
they padlocked your house,
and repoed your car...
...
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Eric Cockrell
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Hans Vr 15 April 2012

Great amount of wisdom and emotion embedded in this giant truth. I like it, I love it! Top Poetry, Eric, a masterpiece. Agree with Soul that it is a 10 ++++++++ Hans

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Unwritten Soul 15 April 2012

I love this poem, the mind and the lines...everyone is a child and we born and deserve for love and hope...everyone deserves that, even for orphans we still can love them because every one is a children and let we stay to be loved and to love! 10++++++++Unwritten Soul

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 April 2012

Yes, the children are affected more when parents have problems. Well written poem..I give you 10 marks

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