Love That Shines Comments
All that shines,
Spreads rays of light in direction of others,
Just like the Sun's Rays,
Just like the Star's Rays,
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I wonder if the poet has rightly used the word 'eliminate' in the fifth lines of the first and the fourth stanza, and the third of the sixth. May be, s/he might have meant 'illuminate'. Otherwise, 'eliminate' makes no sense of the sentences it is in. I mean no offense to the poet. I appreciate the theme, it's so nice! Only I emphasize that a 'Poem of the Day' should be free of such gross mistakes. Whoever selected this poem as the 'Poem of the Day' must have a look at it again.
Good afternoon Mr. Ahsan. Thank you for your feedback although, I feel your wrote it for Admin at Poemhunter and not a comment for me who wrote the poem. I have gone into my page and corrected the word “Eliminate” to “Illuminate”. Sorry if it upset you in such a gross way. I have published a poem today titled: “You Are A Star” and was sure to spell “Illuminate” correctly. You have a good day now.
A beautiful poem. The world is lacking love. Love is not just romance, it is loving who you are. Every song is about love but it is missing " Love that Shines" Thank you Ellen
In the eyes of love the beauty shines with greater motivation. Happy memories keep each beauty sequence in mind. Eliminates of happiness gather in core of love with brightness. Love is chemistry and love is art. This poem is very brilliantly penned. A nice poem is chosen as the poem of the day! CONGRATULATIONS!
Eyes of love, peace and joy! ! ! Love that shines! Uplifting righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being selected as Poem of the Day! !
A well composed poem of the day. Congrats, dear Ma’am Ellen on your featured piece...10+++
And in the eyes of love, They shine so bright, No matter what color the eyes are, Or the type of people they are, When love shines it show, . liked your poet's notes... love is a mystery. tony
Well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry.
Makes life a better place for all to be, Love is for everyone, If we just let it be, .......... beautifully written about love........congrats....10++ love is light can enlighten the inside as well as outside
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7/28/2025 10:16:11 AM # 1.0.0
A well penned poem. Truly lovely and wonderful...5 stars*****