Tuesday, September 26, 2017

Love Strums My Heart Comments

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Rhythmic sounds enticing intellect, feeling your love more
intensely with every note as it strums my heart with your
unconditional love and caring.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 28 September 2017

This poem comes at the end of a series of poems in which you confront the downside of life, but you have prevailed over the negative forces by writing this series of poems. This one achieves a kind of emotional stasis compared to the earlier which were almost despairing. The second stanza of this one is tender and merciful. It puts you in a good place emotionally and spiritually.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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