Friday, May 23, 2008

Love Struck Comments

Rating: 5.0

You whisper in my ear you’ll be there,
But when I came you’re not anywhere
For a moment I stopped and stared
I tell myself this is unfair
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keturah bailey
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Kesav Easwaran 01 December 2008

love struck...no doubt about it...this poem beautifully brings out how love plays the teasing games with young hearts...good work, Keturah...i give you ten

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Izik Alcox 01 December 2008

very heartfelt, I find the poems about relationships, good or bad are usually the best writing a person does, maybe because there so filled with the intense emotions of the realtionship, not sure though, lol good job

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Tyease Collins 30 May 2008

Wow this poem is really deep. A lot of emotion. I like it **Tyease**

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Christopher Leone 30 May 2008

strong emotion throughout

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