Tuesday, January 13, 2015

Love Story Of Flowers Comments

Rating: 5.0

We love in many different ways,
We love openly in the bright sun rays,
Unlike you don't love in the moon lit nights,
In the night we enjoy the human sights,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Melvina Germain 09 October 2015

You are coming from deep within your soul, gathering up heartprints for all to hold. I love this portrait of a beautiful flower speaking out with no inhibitions to humanity itself. Wheat a beautiful heart you have Akhtar, this is truly a poignant and amazing poem.....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 January 2015

Very beautiful poem. Nicely envisioned.You cruel humans you pluck us and enjoy, - - -really human beings should not be cruel to the flowers only but to the nature too. Many thanks sir.

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Valsa George 15 January 2015

Quite interesting! Yes, the flowers have nothing to hide in their love making!

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Farhan Mirza 14 January 2015

You write the most beautiful love poems I've read on this site. I really mean that. This seems so heartfelt

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Gajanan Mishra 13 January 2015

we love openly in bright sun rays, good writing, I like it.

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Khalid Saifullah 13 January 2015

What an amazing poem! ......................10

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