Thursday, June 14, 2018

Love Story Of A Man And A Bird (All Four Parts Already Submitted Now Re-Submitted Together) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rest here you sweet little bird,
Why are you afraid of me?
In the verandah adjacent to my room
Through the glasses I want to see,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2018

The poem ends with romantic expression. I have read all parts. Beautiful and touching. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 June 2018

A fascinating write! Loved reading it.....10

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Khalid Saifullah 14 June 2018

A master piece by Akhtar Jawad.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 June 2018

A very thoughtful poem. Stupendous write about man and nature. Another profound piece of work from a great poet.10++++++Onto my Poem List.

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 June 2018

Interesting write. I enjoyed reading beginning till the end.

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An excellent poem Akhtar 10+++ Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Robert Murray Smith 14 June 2018

A supreme poem of man and nature. Sensitive and inspirational.++10

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