Love Story (Brotherly Love) Comments
he offered her all the treasures that she desired
if only she could put out his fire.
the fire that was in his soul
was starting to burn out of control.
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beautifully written.. I liek it a lot. its all in God's plan!
The selflessness of the brother was rewarded. A happy ending to a very absorbing story. Excellent, Louis. Kind regards, Sandra
Wow this was amazing...what a beautiful end you give...it made me speechless...liked these lines the most 'heart was broken...but! another word was never spoken '...Marvelous
Beautiful ending Louis, I know This scenario happens plenty of times, It is something that can take so many turns and show the world as to what kind of people you could really be dealing with. 10+++ for the good guys
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8/17/2025 11:22:00 AM # 1.0.0
A lovely poem to read and it tells its story well.Self sacrifice leads to rich rewards.