Tuesday, June 7, 2022

Love Story Comments

Rating: 4.8

His gun pointed towards her head
Her gun also reciprocated
Stared at each other's eyes for a long time
Neither of them wanted to commit the crime
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Nabakishore Dash 08 June 2022

loved each other till death separated them is really the meaning of love. Well crafted poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 June 2022

this is a brilliant tragic poem

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Maybe, today, people love their guns more than they love each other. Nice poem. But, wrong message. Enduring the difficulties with an open heart and love for one another is what one need to practice…

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