Sunday, March 24, 2019

Love Story Comments

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Love story

You were going to be a dancer, a poet, going to save our world. I was content to be in the reflection of your eyes. I told you often dear lover. You are my art, my wonder, my mystery and my midnight dancer.
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Mahtab Bangalee 28 May 2019

beautiful remembrance and beautiful poem

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 May 2019

words of love undecaying, immortal, eternal since it birth it can easily make alive its beloved

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Bonaventure Onuabuchi 15 April 2019

Quite a love story, very enticing

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 April 2019

Thank you John for visiting my page and reading my poem -" Love is all embracing." Remain blessed, dear Poet.

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Castellenas John 05 April 2019

Thank you Geeta. I appreciate the comment.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 April 2019

The spring of love, the beautiful memories, the romantic places, the dances, make this poem a dream. John, i loved the way you have brought in memories of places like Germany, Paris, Belgium, England, Switzerland. A tale told with minute details. I am sure, Beatrice remembers your ardent love.......10

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Jennifer Birchall 02 April 2019

A wonderful love story so beautifully illustrated.

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Castellenas John 05 April 2019

Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate the comment.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 March 2019

A beautiful love story. It expresses in detail the wonders and magic of love that hold us spellbound. Though poignant at the end, the memories that have been imbibed in the mind, so wonderful, will be long cherished in our lives. A heartwarming write.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 March 2019

see how you love love story never speak of dying Read my MOMS SMILES SHE LIVES EVEN INN DEATH I am dying since the last 80 ears but not dead yet why do you all live death vibes it does me surprise come smile with me have a kiss or two my world of happiness share will you when we die no one will know vibes negative you distribute like mystic prasaadam that wouldn t do you may be from a world of mysticism so I must in modern parlance you shoo

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 March 2019

You were my beautiful Beatrice and I told you often. I will write a million words for your beautiful face, I will sing to the morning sky, how you made love, alive and well in my world. simply beautiful dear poet. thank u. tony

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