I think you understand
Deep inside we can relate
That joyous surprise
When you enter Love's gates
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When you enter Love's gates, you are in the universal realm of desire and affection and of poetry. Thank you for sharing your poem..
How well you word and paint the picture of love with such movement, truth and rhythm, that we're sorry when the poem ends. You're poems are simply wonderful.......
A lovely poem with deep romantic urge.. very brilliantly penned.. you are a prolific writer Hannah .. Congratulations..!!
Lovely poem of love, again. Conversation flowed like water And time it sped on by You smiled after each sentence Felt sad at each goodbye. Quite true. And, You fought like cat and dog But only then did you realise No matter what the hurt was You couldn't break those ties Each little fight makes the bond stronger...