@ Love Story Comments

a sad and poignant piece.......love really brings pain, but also eternity..................beautiful write...

O rain thou art to give pain well composed thanks Sis

I am deeply saddened by this poem. Its poignancy and intensity. A love story that will touch many a heart and perhaps, shed some drops of tears from some eyes.

, , , a poignant write, , , sounds like a real story, , , the pain of these lovers can be easily felt in you write, , , nicely done, ,

it's a touching poem, sometimes love doesn't cross each other path so it just went straight all along. it's painful perhaps. but love never requires more than love itself.. emotion is a part of heart that some ppl has to deal with, thanks for sharing the wonderful poem