Monday, January 19, 2009

Love Story Comments

Rating: 4.5

As we walked hand in hand
Down the beach with our toes in the sand
Under the moon light
Your smile shinned so bright
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tyler gayman
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Jen Shearer 20 January 2009

The words you chose for this poem are very accurate :) You express yourself very well

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Dark Gurl 55 20 January 2009

ohhh tyler.. sounds like u truly love someone..lol perfect poem.. well done..

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Lisa French 19 January 2009

This is a really sweet poem. I like the way you write! You've gotta keep writing cause you sure are good at it! Great work, keep it up Lisa

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Danielle Bennett 19 January 2009

for being a new writer you are really good. so far i've liked them all keep writing.

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so sweet i like how you wrote this... A lot of feelings and hope in this poem KRista

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Katherine A. Cheng 19 January 2009

There's an innocence in it that seems to make the world melt away. Good job.

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Ana Zaldivar 19 January 2009

i could feel you in this words. :) very well written :)

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