As we walked hand in hand
Down the beach with our toes in the sand
Under the moon light
Your smile shinned so bright
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ohhh tyler.. sounds like u truly love someone..lol perfect poem.. well done..
This is a really sweet poem. I like the way you write! You've gotta keep writing cause you sure are good at it! Great work, keep it up Lisa
for being a new writer you are really good. so far i've liked them all keep writing.
so sweet i like how you wrote this... A lot of feelings and hope in this poem KRista
There's an innocence in it that seems to make the world melt away. Good job.
The words you chose for this poem are very accurate :) You express yourself very well