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I heard a love story about a very young couple, residing in the UK
he was a kindest doctor
had his practice at the house
he was always waiting for her returning from her work
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Thank you, my friend, Sylvia for bringing right before our eyes this kind of story. Out of this tragic event, a moral lesson springs and the readers will be guided by the circumstances narrated. Beautifully conveyed write.
I'll tell you frankly, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, this is a true accident happened in the UK. I am still shocked, since the husband is called now a killer. In all marriages, this accident can happen eventhough true love is there. How tragic this must be for the young sons, they still need a mother now she is dead.I have created this true story like this, to make that seem not so eerie.
thank you so much for your perfect feedback and excellent words, they do contribute a very lot to this poem about killing own spouse accidentally. Thank you for your valuable response and feedback. Your very precious comprehension as I can read in all your comments and compliments, I do appreciate a very lot and much respect are from my side. May God's Blessings be greatest and fall upon you and your beloved family. My gratitude is endlessly.
Inflicting injury to our spouse is and will always be prohibited and must be punished. The vow that we made before God and men that we should cherish each other is violated the moment we lay hands on our spouse.
Indeed, it is violated at the moment one of the couple slapped the other. Their solemn promise before God of loving and cherishing each other until death do them part. Thank you so much for your comments most valuable.
Love and respect must go hand in hand. If we love our spouse, we must respect her rights to do things that make her happy as long as it will not prejudice the relationship. Marriage is not tantamount of surrendering our freedom. We can still live life.to the fullest as long as it is not detrimental to the smooth relationship between spouses.
I like your responses very much, they are neatly woven and they give a summing-up crystal clear. Thank you so much that you comprehended the poem's content. These responses are here, because of your generous and gentle heart. Thank you so much for your excellent feedback.
From this response and feedback I still can learn a very lot in how love relations can function at the fullest without surrendering the freedom. Truly a love relation at the utmost exciting and still respecting and appreciating each their free spirit while the passion and love are still reigning and blessing their love
Wow, such a tragic love story. So poignant. It is hard to think how love could be so controlling. sometimes. A wonderful narrative with a meaningful message.
Thank you so very much for your constant support and the precious and valuable response upon this poem. Your worthy comments and compliments most appreciated. Your words do mean a very lot to me, Mrs. Juan-Austin, this you must know. Thank you that you like the poem.
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7/31/2025 6:10:18 PM # 1.0.0
Too young to love! ! ! ! Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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