Hungry was the street
Lying before me
Thirsty was the soul
Helping guiding me.
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very well written, a bit negative, nothing wrong wtih that, nice to read, great job
Beautiful Poem. Loved It especially this line 'Unwired Dickensian slum'.10++
a beautiful personification of the hungry streets...i also liked the usage of Dickensian slum to describe stolen love.. very nice..keep writing.
I am of the firm opinion that Love- Divine Love can only create and never kill. Let us love all and serve all.Pl. see some of my poems on Love in the PH.
its a nice poem. a good way of putting your feelings in words. pl read some of my poems too and send your comments. take care
love kills and heals...A truth rediscoverd! A Very touching poem of love has touched me...
Alas! I met her With, all skeleton scattered Grave broken and torn And the wedding ring stolen...so touchy poem and i was moved by pain iit...lovley creation....do visit and keep on writing....10 read mine mary to marry and bidding farewell
Unbelievable discovery at the end of a brave quest-to bring good news in circumstances obviously dire and troubled to the dead. What depths had people sunk to that even the dead had not been respected! A well written poem that took great courage to write.May the spirit of your loved one departed reach out to you in the love that was and will always be between you.
Beautifully expressed. Words are meaningfully scattered around the verses.