Friday, September 18, 2009

Love Stolen... Comments

Rating: 4.9

Hungry was the street
Lying before me
Thirsty was the soul
Helping guiding me.
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RUP POKHAREL
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Om p Nirola 29 January 2018

Beautifully expressed. Words are meaningfully scattered around the verses.

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Shiva Adhikari 29 January 2018

Wonderful Expression Matching many real life situations

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Juan Carlos Abeti 28 September 2009

very well written, a bit negative, nothing wrong wtih that, nice to read, great job

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 28 September 2009

A touching beautiful poem well penned.10.

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Supriya Prathapan 26 September 2009

Beautiful Poem. Loved It especially this line 'Unwired Dickensian slum'.10++

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Nithya Raghavan 24 September 2009

a beautiful personification of the hungry streets...i also liked the usage of Dickensian slum to describe stolen love.. very nice..keep writing.

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Lalitha iyer 22 September 2009

Very touching one, Really nice.

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Subbaraman N V 21 September 2009

I am of the firm opinion that Love- Divine Love can only create and never kill. Let us love all and serve all.Pl. see some of my poems on Love in the PH.

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Seema Chowdhury 21 September 2009

its a nice poem. a good way of putting your feelings in words. pl read some of my poems too and send your comments. take care

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Braja K Sarkar 21 September 2009

love kills and heals...A truth rediscoverd! A Very touching poem of love has touched me...

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Aparna Sinha 21 September 2009

very expressive and touching, great write

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 20 September 2009

I can so picture your poem. Nice write 10

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Indira Babbellapati 20 September 2009

you created word pictures of pathos...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2009

Alas! I met her With, all skeleton scattered Grave broken and torn And the wedding ring stolen...so touchy poem and i was moved by pain iit...lovley creation....do visit and keep on writing....10 read mine mary to marry and bidding farewell

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Matt Mooney 19 September 2009

Unbelievable discovery at the end of a brave quest-to bring good news in circumstances obviously dire and troubled to the dead. What depths had people sunk to that even the dead had not been respected! A well written poem that took great courage to write.May the spirit of your loved one departed reach out to you in the love that was and will always be between you.

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