Friday, April 18, 2014

Love Still Lives Comments

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I wish that I could say
That I'm over you
I wish that I could tell you
That you and I are through
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Ray Hansell
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Khairul Ahsan 18 April 2014

You have expressed the conflicting feelings of a lover very well in this poem. Well done!

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