Love Speaks Comments

Your love poem is good, keep it up.

Evocative art in truth love and more work...

I immensely enjoyed reading this poem. It's a very good write. The rhyming scheme added a certain flair to the poem. I will enjoy reading more.

Pretty good. It would definitely make your poem alot better if you studied English more. That would make it a lot easier to read and understand, and make it alot better overall. Hope you find it helpful.

nice rhyming, i enjoyed reading this

I enjoyed your poem, but to parts confused me, is it a error or am i just misunderstanding what you wrote? I breed you every day breed? When you smile, impossible to head it I Dont understand the 2nd part of this line. Other than tht luv it: D

a sweet poem! ! I lke romantic poems like this one! ! Top marks! ! !

'tis a wonderful romantic poem, so sweet and emotional! ! ! Top marks! !

great expression. feelings are hard to express so keep trying, ric

Hi Molay, in the 5th line did you meanneed you every day instead of breed.. I felt that it was an error. In the second verse you have show it in the first line and I think know it would give you a better ryhme in the second. Also, the very last word I think you mean any instead of eny. Otherwise it has a sweet emotional feel to it and something to say. Hope this has been of some help. Obviously you enjoy writing and if you read the old masters of poetry you will find their writing most helpful Good luck, you have lots of potential, hope I've been some help and you don't feel hurt.

This is a very emotional poem.It's very sweet but it could be better........but I really liked it!

if its your first piece of work..i must say its very good. you cn imagine th concept and th feel of th poem a lill better though...but nevertheless, its a good poem.. :)

Hi molay Your poem is sweet and real. I get the sense of it real well. The wording could be better. Pps comment on my poems.

nice poem keep writing the more you write, the better you get you seem to have alot of feelings.. poetry is the best outlet ofcourse one question: do you write poetry in French as well?

Good poem if i say but you also need to improve on the choice of other words you use

Love is the best thing in the world. Great write.

Sounds like you are truly head over heals. Nicely written. Keep penning

A true poet speaks & writes from th heart Poetry is abt feeling as u say it so clearly My heart cries out to th rude brckly Who considers himself as Shakespeare Clearly he'll nevr understand how this all goes I understood th poem and loved it Thanks for inviting me. Yes! 'Dnt quit yo day job' Poetry isn't about greed Even an infant could undrstand tht Its sad tht we have ppl like brckly In ths ocean f ours Good luck

AWWWZ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! what an abbsolute adorable love poem! ! ! ! clearly states what i exactly feel for my BF! ! ! ! wonderful poem! ! ! ! truely amzing and splendid! ! ! <3 <3 <3 absolutely incredible! ! ! brought a smile to me ty for the invite to read this fantastic poem! ! ! ~Bella

LOVE UR POEMS.... THEY ARE GREAT! ! ! ! :)