Monday, August 15, 2016

Love Slap. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never asked for love,
but it slapped me in the face;
I would have gone on by,
content with my own pace.
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dave lessard
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Lorraine Colon 18 August 2016

Oh, how sad! We don't mind love's slaps, but when they come from the one we're hoping to win, that really hurts. Your poem made me laugh a bit because of its unexpected ending. I liked it.

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